That was an awesome poem from all accounts I'm far fro perfection too! ^_^ Great work hope to see more.

^_^ Love it! Keep it up!

Too true! Bravo! I know what you mean... everyone is fake on TV, and everyone wonders why teens are so messed up these days... well, how about showing a fat girl being the popular actress of today, or the guy with horn rimmed glasses who isn't making a fashion statement, he really needs them to see! LOL, anyway, good work!

Brutally honest, its wonderful. You obviously didnt hold back when you were writing it and i think that is what makes it such a powerful poem.

Extremely well-written! The rhythm and style of rhyming make the words jump out of the screen. In fact, the poem would sound great if put to music!

Lovely, and what you say is very true. I love the name! Visions of Perfection... its... great(was going to say perfect). Wonderful poem.