there are some excellent images and phrases in this, and some good emotion as well (you can tell that it came from wandering thoughts of the heart). flows nicely, again. i think it gets better and better as it goes along. favorite lines were: "whispered starlit proposals," "bring all hell to earth/with a nod," "locking Egypt in the crypt of God," and "just sifting through humanity." nice piece, as always. hope you post again soon. :)