Chillingly omnious...

great poem! i really like this, especially the first and second lines. wonderfully written. nice work. keep it up!

Excellent.

i like this one and a lot of the others so on my fav authors you go..lol

oh i really really like this one. my only concrit would be this: i think it would sound better like this-

the smalles of her children

has the largest eyes

so that way it's one child we can focus on

I liked this.

Heart of the Sword