As a theatre person, I know this feeling. Nicely expressed.

really good i loved it!

are you talking about just the stage..or the person who is nervous?

Stage of fear

Stage of sorrow

Stage of love

Stage of tomorrow.


that's what caught my eye.. good poem.

wow, that was so good! It describes what the person is feeling do well.. 'take another deep breath and swallow...'

I love the last stanza. :)

-bish.

This was very well described! I like it!

~ CoolBeans18s

Good way to describe it.


~Heart of the Sword

This poem is GREAT! I perform a lot--dancing, singing, acting, etc.--and I feel that you have really captured how a performer feels. :)

Like a previous reviewer, I'm not a performer either, but I understand the agony of self consciousness so well portrayed here.

Too true, but I don't sing, nor act, its just how I feel whenever I stand in front of a crowd.
You wrote this really well and you pt feelings into words which sometimes can be hard to do.
Nice writing style (well poetry) and hope it improves even more. (Not that it needs to.)

Bya-
D+D

true and funny