this is a really good poem and i can relate to it _

Great poem again, it flows so smoothly, and the message is one many can relate to. The repetitions really enhance that , I've added "Walk with me" to my faves. ;-)

Wow... What a powerful piece. I can totally relate to the last four lines, 'Sick of the way, That I'll never be free, And I won't be jappy, Until I've found the real me.' I can truly relate to that... Heh. Very good job, I enjoyed it.
much love
vintage fade

I like it so
I want you to know
That it's really good!
-Corbyjane

Another poem i can totally relate to! Its everything ive been feeling for way too long now. I love how it flows! Its really good!

yeah, thats how i feel like sometimes . not a nice feelinh, but this poem was beautifully expressed!

This kind of laments as a Linkin park song if you think about it, but i love it all the same!

amazingly written, keep up the good work