I like this story. I wish you'd put more though.

After a long pause (I know, fictionpress had the fault) you wrote this wondeful chapter.
I like a lot the way you "draw people", somehow, it's easier to understand the stories and the characters if you just let them be.
It is just great.

Hmm... In the summary you say this only has four parts, but this really seems unfinished. Keep working on it.

That was really great but you need to write more. The main character's(Michael, is it?) emotions are articulated really well. Plus Daisuke sounds very good looking XD Well done.

Hey there!
Yeah, you're right, lot of influence from Anime and that stuff (sorry I'm not actually into that).
I tell you what, I heated Lena a while ago... but now, I think I'm starting to understand her... anyway, my favorite character will always be Michael!
Update soon I say! :)

Yay, a new chapter. ^_^ It's good, and I like the character development you showed in Lena and her brother. Keep working on this!

I liked it very much! I can't wait for the other chapter.

HHmm... methinks this will turn out to be an interesting story. You've got a nice style of writing, and I love the descriptions and the whole attitudes of the people. Keep working on it.

You surprise me as always. This new story has a good plot, I like it... but you will continue with the others won't you? because it will be a pity to left unfinished them as they also had the right meassure of sadness and beauty.
I'll be checking from time to time your updates.