I really like the theme of this poem. You did a good job capturing the paradox of being on the outside - feeling lonely, but knowing it would be worse to be one of "Them." I think you should do some more with the whole "show-not-tell" thing, though. The simplicity line "I'm not one of them/but I don't want to be either," but you could follow it up with an example or a reason. It would help the reader get into the poem's character more. Just an idea!

An individual. Not a bad thing. Great poem..it really makes u think.

ok I love everything you write *sigh* but you just don't write enough!!!!!!!
well.....
I guess that is it.

Punk.

....powerfull....great wrighting....

Sounds just like me...

This is emotional.Describes the way i used to feel when my best friend dumped me for other supercool friends.Write more!!

i swear you write good..please write more.

Thats me. Thats totally me. I know how you feel. But think this youre a star. Your writings are so great that i cant help myself writng them down look at them and start think. Dont let it get to you, Youre the best:

powerful... I feel the same way sometimes. so alone...

Thats pretty sad to be a lone like that, to be an outcast. But it was a good poem

This is the second poem of yours that I've read-I really LOVE your style and I can completely relate......

This reflects what alot of us feel everyday... When you write something that people can relate to and at the same time it comes from the heart... It results in a real hit. :)