I simply love the rhyming scheme. It's beautiful. It's so smooth you could never tire of reading it. Hats off to you.

i just wanna say wow...so yahe wow i'm not a poet so i don't claim to know much about poety except i like it and that i liked alot

Excellent piece. You conveyed your feelings in a way that most consider unformatted or informal, but I see it as originial and ingenious. Great work! :o)

"Lament in silence for yourself, that person you did not meet."
that was my fav part...but overall i really liked this..because i can relate to it exactly! i hate it when i cant express myself..its so frustrating..
ok enough about me
great job
kitsune-oni

Wow, PhoenixSlayer, you really outdid yourself on this one. You explained the situation and expanded on it without using too many words to make it seem lengthy and boring. It's short and sweet, to quote someone. But really, the tone of this simple rhyme is bittersweet and sad, lamenting the loss of creativity, and that is what brings pleasure and joy into life, is it not?

See you soon! :D Take care.

FuuHououji

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Sounds kinda like something from Dune or LOTR. Or MAYBE it's something from Slaying Pheonix? Anyway it's really good and I would like it if you could take a look at some of my poems, A.?

~LG~