Reviews for Treasure: Book One of the Lost Gods

Reviews For: Treasure: Book One of the Lost Gods - Reviews: Page 1 of 14

Masakimaru 2008-07-26 ch 21,	abuseoh freak! this was totally...ah!! i'm at a loss for what is exactally...but it was awesome!!
Princess of Lies 2008-06-16 ch 21,	abuseI know I'm a jerk for not reviewing every chapter, but it was too good to stop reading! I loved the ending a lot. You put a lot of work into this, and it shows. Great job, and keep writing! (Please?)
Princess of Lies 2008-06-15 ch 2,	abuseNingyo, eh? Would that have anything to do with the fact that in Japanese folklore a ningyo (人魚) was "human fish" or a mermaid? I thought it sounded familiar, so I looked it up and got this: Anciently, it was described with a mouth like a monkey's, small teeth like a fish's, shining golden scales, and a quiet voice like a skylark or a flute. Its flesh is pleasant-tasting, and anyone who eats it will attain remarkable longevity. However, catching a ningyo was believed to bring storms and misfortune, so fishermen who caught these creatures were said to throw them back into the sea. A ningyo washed onto the beach was an omen of war or calamity. So, by being on land, will Captain Kindan Ningyo bring war or calamity? And The Fuujin... I looked that up too. (Yes, I'm nosey, but I prefer to think of myself as curious). Apparently Fuujin (風神) is the Japanese god of the wind and one of the eldest Shinto gods. He was present at the creation of the world and when he first let the winds out of his bag, they cleared the morning mists and filled the Gate between heaven and earth so the sun shone. You probably already knew that stuff, but I was quite surprised at your usage of Japanese folklore and beliefs. A good kind of surprised.
abbybyrd 2008-03-26 ch 11,	abuseOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!! They're twins?!?! I can't believe it! OMG! Btw, I LOVE this story and everybody in it. LOVE. Now i must keep reading!
True.Randomness 2008-03-22 ch 21,	abuseThis story was fantastic and very fun to read. It was creative and it manage to keep the suspence till the end of what could happen. There were also a lot of things that I didn't see coming, one of them was Taka and Nankyo being twins, other was all of them living, and last was Raiden being a god. I thought it would all be a tragedy and I am glad it wasn't. Not only was the story was a joy to read but it also was writen very well. The characters stayed in character and when they weren't it was said so, the plost when slowly and all things were covered, except ofcourse what might be covered in the continuation of the story. The only flaw I saw in this story is that the shift of scene or shift in time within the chapters were made in a way that it wasn't notable until something seem off with the scene, which left me confused for a while until I realized what happened. I am not sure if in your later "books" it doesn't happen, but it would hurt to keep an eye out on how you make a scene or time shift. Anyways, I look forward to reading the rest of your stories, I am not sure but I think there is to be five books since only five things that are big were mentioned in the prophecy, so I can't wait to read the other two that are up and the two that are to come.
the-typical 2008-03-17 ch 4,	abuseFavoriting! =D
i-see-faeries 2008-03-07 ch 21,	abuseHm, this is interesting, very interesting. At first, I wasn't sure about this story, and in fact, now that I've finished it, I'm still not sure. But something kept me reading until the end, and I guess that's all that matters. I liked this well enough. Like I said, interesting.
some reader...^_^; 2007-12-06 ch 17, anon.	abuseAH! I knew it! I knew he had to have an important unique special reason for being there or characteristic (just like everyone else -_-...). I just didn't think he was a god...how will Taka take this? O maybe there'll finally be some explanation for Raiden's weird manner towards Taka...maybe past lover?...T_T i'm so close to the ending now (for this story at least). I wonder how it'll end...guess I should keep reading. (actually, to tell you the truth, i read this chapter a while ago. i just never had the time or willpower to come here and actually review. Oh, and how could I forget. THEY FINALLY KISSED! squeal took them long enough. >:( but i wonder, did Kin unconsciously fall in love with Nankyo at first because of his looks? hmm...well, i guess i should get back to homework.
DBZ-FAN-JESS 2007-10-28 ch 1,	abuseOk also made the realization that I loved this story by you as well I read it a couple months ago... you are def. on my fav author list. Great stories.
Joy4eva 2007-09-24 ch 21,	abuseGreat story!I enjoyed reading your story,now I am going to move on to the second book. =D
starflower-gem 2007-09-21 ch 20, anon.	abuseI'll admitt, this chapter threw me a bit. In the previous chapter you said that Taka would be one of the gods and this whole time Kyo was going to be the sacrafice. Then out of the blue Taka is the sacrafice and Kyo is the God. If you were going to do that, I wish you would have explained it. Other then that, great job. Star
Queerido 2007-08-30 ch 21,	abuseThis has got to be one of my favorite story's on F.P. It is one of the only story's on this site that I've read over and over and over again, because I love it so much. I stayed up past 3 am just to finish it even though I know by heart how it ends. Congrats on writing such a wonderful story!
... 2007-08-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis by far is my favourite book! I just can't stop loving your characters. Raiden and Taka, Kyo and Kin... my god, they're just so lovable and very appealing together. I went to your site, and read the extras aswell for this story, all I can say is...wow! Amazing! Ahh...im off to fantasy land now, lol. Keep up the great work, and can't wait to read more from you. :D
Hannah 2007-01-18 ch 11, anon.	abuseHaving gotten half way through this story, I must say I'm very impressed. Wonderful plot twist at the end of chapter 11! I'm currently editing a manuscript due for publishing this year so I'm very sharp with seeing technical errors at the moment. Its nice to read something with very few of said errors. Thank-you for sharing your story, ~Hannah.
NOTPOSTING 2007-01-12 ch 21,	abuseaw...I absolutely love it!! love it love it love it!! now to go read the next one!

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