most excellent. all of your poems, i just didn't want to review them individually,so...yeah.

i also wonder if you took the name Jareth because of the goblin king (head over to fanfiction.net, movies, labyrinth if you don't know what i'm talking about)

cheers

this would make a great song, i think. would you mind if i put it in my bio? this rocks. email is knox90@hotmail.com

Have I said that I love your work? Cuz I love it, lots. And this poem would be one of the many reasons why...
~kitish

Interesting . . . Definately a good piece. Again, your rhyming is flawless. I really don't know how you do it . . . *shakes head* I wish I could write this well. Over all, a very good piece of work. ;)

Tenika Dargan

Reality is relative.

i love it.