I love it! Make sure you double check grammar though. I liked the repitition of the word "subservience"-- made me laugh. I know it's been years and years since you wrte this (echhk) but if you ever get the spare time, maybe you could possibly start to write more . . .? *hopeful voice*

Haaha! Very funny. I like your writing style, and I'm happy to be able to say that Lena does not seem in the slightest like a Mary Sue. ONWARD WITH THE TALE! *clicks on next chapter*

Yay!! I think I'll just read your stuff instead of actually trekking out to the library or anything. It's so good and professional! Sorry I'm taking so long to read all of your stuff.

*giggles* I liked that last song... Keep writing I liked this fic ^-^

Heehee! I like Zal and I think Lena isd cool, but you should flesh her out more. Hahahaha, I needed that. :)