Nice start ^^ its pretty how it goes at the end, pulling him back into the house

lmao, a riding crop XD superb

davie-poo!! u havent updated!! lol...(is sammy-kin btw) this is my combined name w/ another author on here ^-^ neways get a move on it boy! lol j/k lyl late
Sammy-kin

aw, man, that would SUCK. crazy insane blondes...damn. lol, good times

~color outside the lines~

Hm...that was interesting! It was good, no matter what you think. You should deffinately continue it!

*Kat*

lol gotta love that. I actually laughed out loud, kinda rare, unless someone utters the phrase 'le darn'. oh crap, here I go again...

this is gd, r u gonna do more chapters cos i think u shud. its quite funny really lol.

very interesting lol um yea...heh
DreamNightmare

heh, that was funny ^_^

~Arayuldawen~

really funny!!

The only thing I found unlikely about this story was he didnt like bondage! WTF!? How many men on this earth dont like bondage?! Not Many! lol You rose to the challenge well though

- Crucified Sanctity -

This is..::splutter:: :;choke::
Excuse me

::laughing my butt off::

Well, you certainly won this one, huh?