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| Deathly Nightshade 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuseMake the mum kill herself! ^_^... that would rock |
| the incredible hulk 2003-09-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. It's good writing and you should definetly write more. I'd think chapters after would be her getting on with her life afetr her son's death. Oh yeah. And thanks for reading my stuff. Cote |
| KristyGrace19 2003-08-22 ch 1, | abuseAww... very sad. It was very short, and there could have been more description and parts could have been elaborated on; however it was not bad!! :) Keep writing. -Kris |