Sounds really nice! pliz continue if you can! It needs a little more body before anyone can criticize.

I think this is brilliant! I love the relationship between Melanie and Wesley. I think it's going to take me a while to remember all the relationships between the Archanes though...but the more there is...the better I'll get... *hints* MORE! :p

Yes, where are the mysterious couple, dun dun dun. lol, where was that line i found so catchy..."his 312 years of experience" adding it in so casually, it made me laugh. Also the reference to the cheshire cat, lol, keep up the good work the two of you, i look forward to more.

*applauds*

Well, this story sounds, really good, why would I expect anything else. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more.

Well, well, well, my little mortal cupcakes, you have out done your self’s ^_^
It’s an interesting read, the characters are filled with possibility and promise and you can count me in for chapter two.
And oh Emme, you can leave your reviews now {!} ::blushes:: I swallowed my pride and changed my mind.
Just keep writing please dear. Thank you.

Hey, this is fantastic. Very good explanations. I love the villain characters. You are very good writers. But I get you changed a bit of stuff in the magical creatures'...abilities, if you will. That is a very tiny let down but I can live with that. Please, ad more soon.

And please check out my own story - the Titan Chronicles, thank you.

..er..Hi.

I'm adam, one of Hollies better friends. She demanded a review, so I must review.

Overall, I loved it. There were a few bits of wording that i'd have changed, like useing the word 'grass' twice in the first paragraph, but that hardly matters. The fic is yours, and as such you don't have to listen to a word I say.

I loved the idea of The Order of Archane. You've managed to create something wonderfully seamless in the way that it blends into a persons dreams and what they'd find possible.

I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

yours,

Adam.

o, another story?! i dont see how you can keep up with all of these! i sure cant. lol, anyway. i love it. its pretty good so far, but i need to read more to form an opinion *hint hint* as in please update as soon as possible.