Hey **!
WOW! Your story kicks **!
I love it so much, u gotta update soon!

Colleen i was wondering when i looked up your story. and was thiking is this the same colleen from (wink wink)*-
anyway your story is awsome i REALLY LIKED IT!
and i hope u enjoy mine when i finally get the internet!

ya best friend*

vicki*

(xoMIgibbi2)

i'll call u later and explain...

More. This story is really good. I like it, but her does seem a little racist. I hope they change though, but of course I still like it. Update soon, please.

nice chapter. you should *really* try to make them longer though, *shrug* oh well, i know how you feel though, school takes up most of my time. oh, i couldn;t help but notice you kept switching point of views, please don't do that! its so annoying! ^^;; well keep up the... good work!

EK!

I need more!

lol

More, please.

...azibo? ...ok... yes... right *slow nod* well nice chpater, try aming them longer... yeah ok, keep it up!

Really nice, but might I suggest a bit more elaboration on the setting? Other than that this is shaping up very well, and the dialog between the characters makes me feel like I'm really there. Very well done, keep on writing!

yey! a new chapter! fun! wow... what a family... o_O;i liked this capter, very good. try making them a bit longer though. maybe... possibly... anyways! update soon!

I really like your story. I hope you update soon. And thanks for the review I was nervous no one would like it. I can't wait to read your others stories and this one to be updated.

I LIKE!


MORE PLEASE.

ok. this is good. can'r wait to see how this story is. lot's o potential! i like your style! it's fun! well keep up the good work! and mooncakes! =D

Neat begining. It sounds a little trite (have you seen "Bend it Like Beckham"?) it'll be intersting to see what you do with it.

Reine faye

Please, write the real story soon, I'll read it!