Wow, that was powerful, i really liked it. Made me feel all tingly. I'm glad i read it, nice job. *adding story to fave list*

Absolutely brilliant. Outstanding work. Keep it up. : )

Very touching and thought-provoking!

That's soo good! Very interesting, how you've shifted the years around. Very sad tho.

It's in the essay section because that's what it is... an essay. It's not any of the other things. It's basically just an essay about life after death and the progression of time in the afterlife.

Query: why is this in the "essay" section?

aww, that was sweet... i liked it... it wasn't confusing it all :) good job. you're an excellent writer and i like your style.
What I could not have for myself, I instead wish upon others.
i liked that part a lot :) it's very nice and sweet. the descriptions weren't too much (if you know what i mean) but just enough. good job.
keep it up!

aww...that was SO SAD.
i loved it.
and i almost cried.

Just too lazy to log in. =P
Anyway, that's sad. Really. That's also very touching. It's really deep. I love it.
The last paragraph almost made me cry. But hey, the whole story made me want to cry. I'm sensitive. But jeez, that's really awful and sad.
And I love it. You gifted writer, you!

Im lovin' it!

Places I really really liked:
"...humans, who are never predictable, yet never shocking."
"As they slept, peace came over their faces and I knew they were thinking of me because it was at those moments when I held their hands."
"And between Debra Farber and William Johnson, I call me name out and applaud alone."
"I always ask my sister to take an extra bite or a second sniff and send it to me..."

I really liked your work, and I'm sorry that I'm saying the same stuff everyone else is already stating, but you really are a gifted writer; I hope to read a lot more of you in the future.

This story is touching. I can't find anyflaws with it. How you put how the parents feel about losing the child is touching and how she tells the story is just beautiful.

WOW!
that was so great! i really liked it...but i got confused by the very last paragraph...
i really liked it

I thought that was a very touching story. If you ever write I novel I would love to read it because you are an awesome writer.

Wow... You have a real gift with words. The whole story flows very nicely and it's really deep. I loved it and I hope you keep writing. Keep up the wonderful work. ^_^