lovely. simple language; it flows SO well, almost lyrical. it IS lyrical. ending's great.

(btw - wondering where your Not looking for a Miracle story's gone. it was one of my favourites =( )

love it.

its so powerful...

gods i just love it.

The last line throws off the flow, but adds great emotion. The rhyming doesn't seem at all forced. This was a very nice poem, keep up the good work!

^_^ i love this poem

it's really really really good.

i like how you've captured the true nature of how ppl. think... n i agree... no matter how much you tell yourself that you don't care, inside you do.

>< but yea... i liked it alot. fit together well.

Mrh, Phae, you know I'm here for you if you ever need me. This was beautiful. I intend to take it into Word, play with font and style, and hang it in my room.

I'll always love you, Phae. Believe me, you can't drive me off. Even if that's what you want. ^-^

~ Yume

whoa... yeah.. tis good ^_^ it makes sense to me... stuff about un-acceptance yeah... hm... *thoughtful pose*
anyway, came to your bio through Denetsu No Yume and you were reccommended... I really have to go sleepy-byes now, but I do really want to check out more of your stuff! So, I'll review more later
*hugs*

^.^ Really good poem, once again I feel like it's relating to me. *sigh* I have a ** up life... but that's not the point. Really good poem (as I said earlier) ^.^