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| reader 2008-07-25 ch 32, anon. | abuseP.S. I LOVED YOUR STORY. I would sound tons more enthusiastic, but I just stayed up till five am reading it, so I'm pretty tired. |
| reader 2008-07-25 ch 32, anon. | abuseGeez, this is the craziest story I've ever read. The most intense plot twists ever. Absolutely insane. I think that this should be published. |
| reader 2008-07-25 ch 31, anon. | abuseo.O o.O o.O ! |
| reader 2008-07-25 ch 26, anon. | abuseLoved it! I feel warm and fuzzy. |
| reader 2008-07-25 ch 25, anon. | abuseNice chapter end. |
| reader 2008-07-25 ch 23, anon. | abuseSo long. =P I'm sorry to say that I could not read through it. I hope it's not essential for me to do so... |
| reader 2008-07-25 ch 21, anon. | abuseI love the tone of these passages. It is so exactly what I picture her tone to be. AND OH MY GOD I'M DYING TO FIND OUT WHAT'S NEXT. I'm assuming that it all works out in the end, which is SO nice. |
| reader 2008-07-25 ch 16, anon. | abuseI've been FLYING through the last two chapters trying to get to what the "Pandora's box" was. Thanks for not killing me completely with withdrawn info. That was amazing, perfect, I'm in love! :) And really excited to see what happens next so I'll stop typing now. |
| reader 2008-07-25 ch 14, anon. | abuseI adore these parts! It's a great change of tone and pace, and amazing for keeping the reader interested. I was about to stop and read the rest tomorrow, but that's not going to happen anymore... |
| geminibaby6789 2008-07-23 ch 18,  | abuseThanks for the story! I'll keep on reading! :) |
| geminibaby6789 2008-07-22 ch 12, | abuseThanks for the story so far! OMG! They should totally be together! Keeping my fingers crossed here! :) |
| nkltt210 2008-07-17 ch 33, | abuseamazing story. simply amazing. i cant get enough of this story, please write a sequel. |
| MendyK 2008-06-27 ch 33, | abuseBrilliant story. It was well-thought out and excellently written. Needless to say, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. :) |
| Hannah 2008-06-18 ch 7, anon. | abuseAw, poor baby has to survive without valet parking for one night...note the sarcasm lol. Honestly though, if your standards are low for hotels, i.e. you really are just looking for "a bed and a shower" then that's exactly what you'll get, and usually you'll wish you had just slept in your car! |
| Hannah 2008-06-18 ch 5, anon. | abusehm...that last thought doesn't seem very 'platonic' lol |