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Reviews For: HumptyDumpty
Kazuline
2003-08-23
ch 1, 		abusei like it, esp. the lines where you say "What they know is nothing" and "Never letting a soul in." i liked the ending but i thought it was a bit abrupt. nice imagery w/ the shattering pieces
:-) good job!
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