Wow I like the imagery of this poem. It's very vivid. I could see the things you describe. Good job! You're very talented. Keep writing! :) NB

A somewhat depressing poem, but very well written. Nice work.

Keep writing.

-Seras

(*starts knocking on the walls*) Ah! Seems you've trapped me in your game! NO! He he... For real, this was pretty good. I liked it. Great one!

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

dude, this was awesome. It was truly captivating! It flowed easily and rhymed well! good on ya... hail the ducks, lol.

i love thev feeling in this, its like really perfect. i like it alot.