:S i wonder what happens to Raziel once Taren meets Taymarua...

other than a few gramatical errors, i thought this was really good. you have an amazing amount of detail, which is wonderful. and you also didnt go overboard with the descriptions because sometimes that can just get old. so good job

~color outside the lines~

ps thank u for the review!

*smiles* Nice start. Really cute, this is. Keep making chapters I want to see what happens next.
*bows*