|Reviews for Dance of the Fireflies|
| Franken 3/12/04 . chapter 1
Good second line, loved it
"On the sea of the black sky,"
Very well put.
| obsidian katana 9/9/03 . chapter 1
very beautiful imagery, and really sweet. good job!
| Cirien Phoenix 8/25/03 . chapter 1
That was lovely!
| Kowski 8/24/03 . chapter 1
now, i like this one a lot. the image is perfect, and the wording is great.
| swirlygirl 8/24/03 . chapter 1
nice haiku very descriptive
| willowzbitch 8/23/03 . chapter 1
i really like this haiku, nice imagery i can just see them dancing in the night sky,it gives me the impression of them being in love and symbolizing that. love your haiku, more please
| SeaVoi 8/23/03 . chapter 1
thats a nice picture!