Good second line, loved it
"On the sea of the black sky,"
Very well put.

Franken

very beautiful imagery, and really sweet. good job!

That was lovely!

Cirien Phoenix

now, i like this one a lot. the image is perfect, and the wording is great.

nice haiku very descriptive

i really like this haiku, nice imagery i can just see them dancing in the night sky,it gives me the impression of them being in love and symbolizing that. love your haiku, more please

thats a nice picture!