OMG WOW! so into depth sound just like me with so many different personalities. but that was amazing! Pleasse R/R some of my writings! TY.

OMG! Your the best poet I know! I do not lie to you... it's all too awesome!

Simple poem but I can understand some things of what you're going through. We all have that bad stage in our life, and it's usually when we're younger *sigh* but this poem flowed nicely and I can understand some of the emotions you're trying to express. Lots of great writings you have here, well done.

*Jenna*
ps- Thanks very much for the reviews, that meant a lot to me.

I like this, it gets better towards the end (not that it wasn't good at the beginning) I just like the pace of it. Very emotive.

this is quite interesting

This was really great, really well-written! We all feel that way sometimes, I guess, and it's hard to describe, but you did an excellent job of it! Keep writing!

very nice... i like it.

thanx 4 reading mah fics, the least i could do was read urs...

I really lyk this 1..

cyaz,

DnS

Oh...that's so good...It sounds like me. This poem is brilliant, it expresses a lot of feelings,inside! ^-^ i love it.

Very good, a little bumpy reading...but otherwise good imagery. The drowning girl, I like that. I might have a look at your other work. Blessings to you.

the tension in this poem is really good
I enjoyed it.