I realy like it. I only read it because the tittle and pen name caught my eye. But it was very good and now you on my list.

for being about scuicide, this is beautifully written. Me likey lots clapclapclap.

I am returning the favour...
My God, u are a brilliant poet...
u have a way with words I can never hope to have.
Absolutly moving

That was excellent. I seem to feed of morbid poems and stories so bravo. BRAVO. The words just seemed to flow and it made me imagine a hopeless girl locked in the attic with a satin white dress and doll-like, blonde curls. I know I'm rambling, sometimes I don't understand the way my mind works. Anyway great poem...

I think you need to check out on how to get your own poetry published. What I think is: You've got what it takes to be awesome and famous!

pleasant dreams... something that i think most cutters dream for (notice the irony? no? then it's just me...)
it's a beutiful insight..

very powerful. I really liked it but it would be nice if you made your lines longer. It feels like your cutting yourself off. Other than that, It was really good and it was the first poem i have enjoyed in a while.

that was nice.

i havent cut for quite some time, because things arent so bad as they were before.

anyway i liked the poem alot.i like the last 2 lines most. and thanks for ur reviews!

lovely, in a twisted, bizarre way. :)

*sniff* lots of emotion there, you got down to the raw part if your suicidal feelings. I don't want to encourage you, but if you feel cutting helps you feel at ease then I say just do it. Be careful that y ou don't go too far, I say this to all the people I know who are suicidal... be careful with what you're doing, and if you really feel like you're too depressed and there's no way out, cut for yourself if it calms you down and feels good. I feel like cutting is better than drugs, but then again everyone thinks I'm crazy. I haven't slit my wrists for months, I kind of just punch my head til I faint X.x not a good idea either, and I've cut my legs so no one would see my scars if they were on my wrists. *slaps myself* ok I better shut up, anyways, be very careful, it's always good to talk about your suicidal feelings but believe me I know exactly how you feel. Good poem over all, I'm sorry someone caught you. -.- but hey, keep up the good work as I've said.

Jenna ~.^ x

whoa
that was very moving

i love it so much...

Wow... pretty... I like the imagery you have here, and I can sympathise. Nice job.

dude, thats awesome. i love poems and such like this. great job and blessed be!

Unique, interestingly good.

Ah..that was dark...good good...