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| Angelic Hellraiser 2004-03-22 ch 1,  | abuseLOVE IT VERY MUCH. *BRAVO* |
| Aryante 2003-12-05 ch 1, | abuseoh, i'd like to comment now, but I can't actually think of anything to say, but I love it |
| MistrissD 2003-09-16 ch 1, | abuseo I like the way you turned such an ordianary object into such a wonderful poem, the last two lines are so true. |
| soulful eyes 2003-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI like it Maybe you want check out my poem darkness to light |
| Charcoal Angel 2003-08-23 ch 1, | abuseWow. lots of inner meaning there. The last two lines are really great! its true...they're really not 'safe'...great poem! -Line if you have time, can you check out some of my stuff? |
| Shelila 2003-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThe last 2 lines make a lot of sense, so why do they call them safety pins? Good observations! I like this poem, good job! Can you review some of my stuff if you have the time? ~Shelila~ |
| AntiPleasure 2003-08-23 ch 1, | abuseJust came across this and the title attracted me to it. "Safety pins are only safe When you want them to be." Very good line, well written poem :) *Jenna* |