This is an amazing sonnet!

I like the title, and the "with whispers yo speak such delicate words.."

Nice job!

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Beautifully written. I love it.

Get's the point across...It was an effective poem and it deals with an emotion fairly, without the frills that we try to cover it with. I liked it and I think I might read some more of your work...but not now because my attention ought to be elsewhere...bye:).

The Scourge

Love the rhythm and imagery here. Well done.

Very good. I do intend to read one of your stories but i don't have the time to do it right now. I have a lot going on but as soon as things calm down a bit i'll get started on it. Thanks for reading Castle Cintyras!
Nikki

Interesting concept. ;)

*grins* I loved it because it's completely true. People hate the things that are most deserving of the opposite. If something shows the slightest hint of being considered 'perfect', all anyone can muster I hate.

I like the end. Very good!

Nice little twist at the end.