That. is. lovely. I could only dream to imagine writing with the type of skill and creativity you have. HOORAH! :D loved it, in other words.

*Blinks*

XD It was well written, if a tad scattered and confused. If you plan on stopping it there, I would rate it badly. But, continue, explain, and it could turn out very well. ^^

this is short but ever-so-sweet. I like the idea of it - of being torn between completing something and standing in the way of its completion, because of dread of either outcome. The idea that it's hard to love something so much that you'll let it become something you hate. This is so, so beautiful. I like it very much!

Yeah, um. I think it's freaking beautiful. Can't say much else... just.. beautiful.

it's really good. i almost didn't read it because i thought this was only the first chapter and i don't like waiting for updates, but i couldn't reseist. and since it seems to stand well on it's own i don't have to bite my nails!:) still hope there might be more of it at some point though. i'm glad i read it. keep up the good work:)

*blink* Wow. Very lovely. And sweet. And sad, and oddly horrible to think that he nearly became God. Not a 'god' I don't think, but -the- God. And that's frightening.
Though, really, as far as theology goes, I sometimes wonder about the maturity of the Being in Charge. ^__^ Heh. I hope Hell is fun. *chagrined*

Hm...intresing.