Good, and sad. Of course, happy thing are never that interesting are they?
Luv the writing style, keep up the good work!

Wow, this is great so far. It really hooks you right at the beginning. Keep it up, I can't wait for chapter 2! Umm, I could get a bit nit-picky about small errors, but I won't do it here; if you would like me to tell you what I noticed, feel free to email me at JCHCtom@hotmail.com

Now that was intersting and I really liked the title.

So...was your trip supposed to be the inspiration for this fic? If so, ek! ^^ I'm assuming it's a one-shot, which kinda sucks 'cause we didn't get to know too much about the narrator before s/he got offed. Ah well...

Very interesting story, but sad. Well a little mysterious too. Great detail and use of words. Keep writing!!

Peachez ^_~