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| boyzarecrazy24 2008-03-28 ch 13, | abuseSWEET! i love it hahaha thatz hot =] |
| lane 2008-03-07 ch 13, anon. | abuseaw, how disappointing :( i wish you would continue... four years is a very long time |
| lex 2008-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI just love this story you are the Best! Please update. |
| golden-flame4 2008-02-03 ch 13, | abuseOMG! THIS FIC IS AWESOME! i can't even remember whether i've read it before T_T lol... i would LOVE to read more! Joaquin is awesome! horribly mysterious and brooding XD Alex is... cute, in a certain strange way, and the whole thing between Craig and Shane is like whoa! O_O XD lol. i do hope that u'll continue this! :D |
| Ayenti Hwann 2007-12-02 ch 13, | abuseNice :-) I like the Shane/Craig dynamic. The plot so far is really well done, believable (well, once you get past the vampire part... but obviously thats not supposed to be realistic), and detailed. The only problem: Sometimes the plot twists are a little predictable. I could see something was going to happen between Shane and Craig since chapter 8. It's good to have some foreshadowing, but in some parts you lay it on a little thick. It's still a great story, though :-) Please update :-) |
| Fantasy4eva 2007-10-08 ch 13, | abuseNice story!Please update soon =D |
| Providance 2007-04-18 ch 13, | abusei wish you would continue this story its amazing.. |
| kon-chan 2007-02-24 ch 13, | abusecontinue, please? this fic is awesome. i don't know how you managed to think it up, i most certainly don't have the imagination to create anything like this fic. so, please, please update? though you haven't done so in like two years, i'm hoping that maybe this review will make you see how absolutely amazing this fic is and update. yeah, and about the characters...Craig is driving me crazy!! wah, what with all his sulking and closing up!! Shane, too!! they're too clueless. and Joaquin...i kinda hate him. i dunno, this whole master/slave this he's doing is horrible. honestly, i can't stand him. Alex is okay, though, i like his sulky/complicated personality. so please, please, please update! -kon |
| Satan's Angelic Mistress 2007-02-06 ch 13, | abuseJoaquin is creepy. Not scary or anything...okay, that makes no sense. But seriously...owning people? Creepy. And so NOT a turn-on. Oh, and, update soon. And please have more about Mikey? |
| Kamijo - Lareine 2006-12-29 ch 13, | abuseWOW! Doing a little surfing on FP this evening, I came across this story because it was listed on somebodys fave list. The summary intrigued me and I just had the itch to click on it and I am so very happy that I did! I am facinated by this story and may I add that I do so adore your character, Joaquin! You're a terrific writer and I enjoyed reading all the chapters you have so far. Thank you so much for sharing and entertaining us readers! I have already listed this story as well as you in my faves too. ^^ |
| Ruri Star Sykel 2006-12-17 ch 13, | abusegreat story but do you think it's a good idea to have Alex become almost drunk when you would think the the vamper would be thedrunk one? anyways i loved it and they're such a cute cuple to so they better stay a cute cuple! |
| Green Eyed Pixie 2006-10-31 ch 13, | abuseAw, Craig and Shawn have to be together! one of the many reason you should update! please =] |
| Shadesome 2006-08-14 ch 13, | abuseAh! You so have to update this! |
| Reader 2006-05-04 ch 13, anon. | abuseI hope you are going to update once. Because the story is great.Ok. My opinion: I think that Alex is too proud to succumb so easilly and accept that he is a propery. He should be more angry with the vampire for making him a pet, manipulating. They are not even in their relationship, because Jaq doesn't tell Alex anything, desn't spend time with him, doesn't talk to Alex much. He just takes what he wants. If I were in Alexs's shoes I would be humiliated and depressed. |
| Reader 2006-05-04 ch 9, anon. | abuseI am thinking about Alexs' reaction inthis situation. I personally would find evrything more humiliating and tried to rebell if I was in his place.I would be angry at Stewart for sending me there and at Joaquin for treating me like an baby animal- pet. And for trying to buy me with presents like the byke. |