Wow.. Dark..

This was great, the flow, the descriptions, the theme..

Rather creative and very interestin piece..

Seems painful and realistic and truthful all at once..

I liked how you explored the whole subject in the piece..

Interestin descriptions and observations.. Some parts sounded philosophical..

Deep, I liked it muchly..

Loved the ending, it was a great piece..

Keep writing..

Shadafakup

I can relate to this a lot. Good.

::hugs my Krissy bishonen:: Very very nice hon. ::sniffs:: very purdy.

very nice poem, i like it. :)