Reviews for In This Time of Waking

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V.E. Silber 2007-07-02 ch 8,	abusethree cheers 4 karasu tendo! three cheers 4 karasu tendo! woopwoop! lovely, just lovely. very reminicent of dianna wynne jones' "the Homeward Bounders"; u haven't read it by any chance? a bit 2 compilicated 4 my taste & just a tad 2 surrealistically vague, but still very pleasant w a very sympathetic dynamic main and secondary character. however, i did feel that a few of the emotions or statements on Chris' part lacked motive... a little. namely, i didn't really c where they were coming from, u know, from him as a person. such as him suddenly declaring love 4 Cerin; understandable, on a level, but felt a bit ubrupt & non-credible considering the prior main body of interaction & feeling between them, but i'm keeping ur time constraints, goals in the story, & imposed limitations in mind, so i'm not fretting about it silly smiley. either way, i still really liked it & enjoyed it immensley, though i'm still waiting w baited breath 4 the new chapters of The Whims Of Lady Luck w. happy writing & luck (where needed) in ur studies, whatever they may b. i'm starting college relatively soon myself giggles excitedly i remain urs 2 keep 4 eternity, ever faithful, ever admiring, ever loving: V.E. Silber
Kidiu Anaji 2007-06-17 ch 8,	abuseSque! Wow! What an eventful story! Just, WOW! I enjoyed reading this! Really great story!
Mitochondriac 2007-04-22 ch 8,	abuse... hang on... ...gimme a minute... I'll find my tongue at some point!! breathes omygodhowdidyouthinkupsomethingsoincrediblycomplicatedandawesomeI-have-no-idea-what-I-should-be-doing-aside-from-gaping-slightly-and-trying-to-form-some-semblance-of-wording-that-will-properly-explain-how-radically-wonderful-I-thought-your-story-was! twitchtwitchtwitch you created such beautiful characters, so many different faces, different parts of their personalities, and I especially enjoyed how you gave things from the perspectives of Mia and Cerin, showing some of thier reasons for why they joined and how hellish it was for them later... thank you for sharing your story, and once again: WOW! i apologize if the review is to long--I'll work on the condensed version later^.^--
lilylupin7 2006-07-13 ch 8,	abuseWow. This story was so incredible. Your style reminds me of Ray Bradbury's (author of Something Wicked This Way Comes-which you should read). It's eerie, dark, and hopeful all at once.
S.Tori 2006-05-02 ch 8, anon.	abuseOh my god. I love you. This is so brilliant. I wanted to eat it. I... GAH! Whatever I say I'm going to end up sounding like either a nutter or a raving idiot, so... laughs this is so incredibly beautifully brilliant. The whole thing was something almost like lucid dreaming - it was so bizarre, because one minute one person held the rules, and the next minute it was someone else. It was so, so, so brilliant. One of my favorite parts, oddly enough, was when Cerin saved Chris from the wraith-lady; he seemed so... not-assertive for quite a while, but then all of a sudden he was panicking, and was all "MINE! YOU CAN'T HAVE HIM!" which is such a beautiful and honest reaction. I loved, loved, LOVED this story. Hats off, kudos, props, and all such things to you. If you ever want fanart, drop me a line and I'll draw you some. For this or for whatever. Because... holyshit, this is sheer GENIUS. Your works are like liquid awesome :D Okay I should stop ranting at you; you're no doubt already aware of your brilliance. But still. Whoah. I mean... yeah... dazed this was really something!
Lady Psychic 2006-04-29 ch 8,	abuseThis is a weird but well written story. The whole dream thing made it pretty original and fresh.
Alicia 2006-01-27 ch 8, anon.	abuseXD I absolutely loved it! You're an awesome writer with great style.
sporkess 2005-10-31 ch 8,	abuseWow. Weird, and surreal, and very intriguing. I think I'd probably have to read it a couple of times to get all of it, but as it is I was very intrigued by your nightmare-fair. I found it very sad, that the people-puppets couldn't remember their own names at the end - the ultimate loss of self and will. And I thought it was good that Ceir, at least, managed to save himself rather than simply be rescued. I know that it's just a story, but I still find that sweet. Another deeply cool story. Congratulations.
Ailenat 2005-01-25 ch 8,	abusei loved it. very well written . it just flowed. I love the whole dream idea, it was mystical. Two big thumbs up.
Shoujo Kitsune 2004-08-28 ch 8,	abuseyum... Great mixture of insanity and romance. You have such creative tales. I love them!
Nekozumi 2004-05-04 ch 3,	abuseYay, it's good, like all your stories. =D
Beetlejuice14 2004-03-14 ch 8,	abuseI wasn't so sure about reading this when I saw the summary. Since I am absolutely obssessed with some of your other stories I decided to give this one a try and I am so glad I did! You just have this way with writing that makes the reader actually picture the surroundings you created. And of course everyone loves slash. Keep writing. Maybe make a sequel to this one. I know I'll definitely read it.
Andi-Lynne 2004-02-20 ch 8,	abuseLove it. You are now officially my favorite online-author ever! :D
Germaine Amundsen 2004-02-01 ch 8,	abuseholds up a pile of pinkish-grey goop look what you've done to me! My brain! My brain! (it was good)
futago>akuma-tenshi02 2004-01-18 ch 8,	abuseextremely interesting... what a terrible world! a lot of use of imagination there... baibai>yukie

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