It gave me the image of two people waltzing; spinning spiral of gothic romanticism. I liked it.

Juliet.

This is really good. Your vocabulary is huge compared to mine, but it all flows real well. congrats.

Wow, you're amazing, you know that? This poem is beautiful. Keep up the good work!

I like this one, the play of words and the vision it delivers is very nice.

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What a lovely lovely poem. I love the aftermath of rain you sometimes . Beautiful, mysterious mist shroudin an concealing all in its grey cowl, who knows what lurks beyond, within, hidden from view? Who dares find out...

Ah gurl! How do u do it! Another one to keep in mind.. *smiles* you write teh saddest, most serene poems. I can just picture this scene..What a beautiful painting it would make..Anyways, awesum awesum work...

Shards Of A Broken Heart

i liked this one also great work all of your poems i have read have been awwesome..keep it up..and thanks for the review!

This pulls at me the way the other one did... I could not help but acknowledge your writing skills once again...

Ayx