Clever... very good. Well written.

I laughed when I read the last part, about snapping the knee! :-D
It's great for a laugh when you aren't expecting one, and the words flow very nicely.

*laughs* It's been a while since I've read some of your poetry, but they're all still very good. I loved the last stanza:

"Barbie Barbie Barbie

What if I snap your little knee?

I know you'd keep on smiling

Smiling smiling, just like me."

*shivers* That sounded quite disturbing, but nonetheless, great poem.

Ja Ne.

Hehe! _ I've got a haiku about Barbie! _ They are so damn scary...and all the charvs in my class have been hit by Barbie fever...*Shudder*

- Nicole xx

Wow, you've really added a lot of poems since the last time I checked. Barbie is rather annoying, and you can probably cut her head off and she would still be smiling.

Whoa... wow. This is killer... very good...

Ashley

that was rather clever! good job

lmao! finally some sarcasm about lil miss perfect babrie! may i snap the other? doesnt anyone realize that if barbie were real she'd fall over cause her boobs are so big?