Wow. This is...just, wow. It really meant something to me, because I'm actually having a similar experience right now. Very nicely written.

I didn't understand it... Oh well...

*teary eyed* That was beautiful. This poem reminds me of what could-maybe-some-time-way-in-the-future happen to me and this one guy... could-maybe. Wow... lovely work.
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Regina O.B

Wow! You seem to be one of the few authors I've seen on here who understands rhythym and meter. Good job! And, "no! Don't kiss Barbara!"

wow, this was amazing! Chilling and unreal, it was like looking in on a dream or a story that's in the process of being told. Fabulous word use, it stirs up such great images and longing, a true poetic masterpiece. There's such a note of truth to this, as hard as it may be to accept, there is a certain amount of truth to all this. I really like the idea of using the months to symbolize seperate people, brilliant. Hats off to you on this marvelous poem!!
~ winter

Wow!
This is heartbreaking stuff... I'm actually stunned into silence right now. I don't have the words to tell you how much this poem moved me.
There's a wealth of personal experience in this one and I think it will hit everyone who reads it in the same way.
Man...

I haven't reviewed all of your poems yet, but no I have! this one and the Holocaust one are my favorites and I look forward to your next ones!

*jaw drops* That was AMAZING!! I have got //chills// from that!

you obviously have passed the understanding of the pain and hardships of love. you've eloquently composed a beautiful tapestry of human passion and pangs of distress. a touching romeo and juliet piece, finally the deep emotions of the sorrowful lovers are seen and thusly felt by the readers of your poem.

why didn't you TELL me you'd written something else? i mean, come on, i'm oblivious to these things. anyway, i love the idea...the beat comes out wonderfully; you sort of have to say it quickly, speed up, and then slow down near the end. i don't know...i just...this is a beautiful. strangely enough, my sister and i are april and september, (birthdays, i mean) and sometimes i feel like this around her...so i just relate with this well, so maybe that's why i like it so much. anyway, write some more poetry, and update, please. or i might have to start begging on my knees. and you don't want to see that. trust me.

Hell girl, that was one of the best poems I've ever read. Absolutely goddamned beautiful. I'm definitely interested in this story now.

really good..i enjoyed that.. and i love the way you've written it

nice allusion thats a cool technique. good poem too. r+r my poems if u want they deal mostly about love and freinds.
recalcitrant

Oh so cool. very beautifuly written as always. and you say you like my style better. Psh.

nya, i agree with that statement, but i disagree too. it's true two people can hurt each other so much with love, but it's also true that if they love each other so much...then sometimes you just have to fight until it's okay. it hurts, but most of the time it's worth it in the end...