It is become more clearer for me now. I love how you write. It is like listening to music. Well that is the best way to describe it anyways. Please write more soon, because I love where this is going. It seems so sad. It fits my mood though. So very tragic.

Great job. i love this so far. Its very interesting. I would love to say more, but I've g2g. I'll be looking for the next chapter!

I like it so far. Please countinue it soon. It was very detailed, but I am lost. Why is he there alone staring into a bowl? Who were the two girls? I have these two main questions running through my head.