o, sweet torn sadness. I liked it very much so. :)

That is shibbiness. I like it. Vurreh pretty.

Kool poem! I really like it. Don't know why, but I've always liked poems like that!

wow, this is really good. u have some amazing skill.please continue to write more poems because u have a fan here!

Aw... It doesn't help the fact that I was listening to NIN's "Hurt" while reading this. I'm gonna go die now...

Much luv,
~WZB~

Very wistful and sand... "I hate you for giving me a taste of what could never be." Very good ending. ^_^ Love it. Keep writin'.

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"Fighting for peace is like screwing for virginity"
Canada

Sad. well, you know what they say, better to have loved and lost, etc. I like it. Simple, yet conveys so much emotion.