Sweet! I really enjoyed reading this sequel. So many relationships! ^_^

This sequel was fantastic. I loved the new characters, my favorite being Juri. And the plot was light and happy, with just enough sadness. Your stories are wonderful and this is just one of your great pieces of art. I also loved that in this story questions were answered left in the first and suggestions cleared up. Thank you for writing just a splendid story.

I can't believe I didn't review this story (and MR) when I read it! I absolutely loved both of the stories. The characters were interesting and had lots of depth, and the story lines were really good. I can't say much more than I loved everything about both of them! I read all the side stories (and I even added MR to my favorites) and yeah...lots and lots of love. ^_^

When Hal was fighting with his g/f, I was thinking "she's really a guy, she's really a guy!" and I was right! I didn't really expect to be right.

And I love this series. You should write more!

great story! this, mount robillard, and the numerous one-shots were awesome! i absolutely loved the characters, and your story was really cool!

soo... any chance of a one-shot of Scott and Lancer meeting Lancer's parents? and a sequel to traces of doubt would be really awesome too...

Yay! You never cease to surprise me! I was totally blown away by the whole Lin and Hal thing, it is just so cool! Once again, I love Lancer and Scott to death, and the whole drag queen thing. It would be really nice if you could write a long 1 shot about Queen Marie's and Queen Sophie's revival... Please?! *makes puppy eyes* I'd love you forever, I swear...

Loved it loved it loved it. Your story was great. I look forward to reading more of your work.

wow...
It took me a while to get through this and The Mt Roulibard (sorry, my spelling isn't too great) story but it was sure worth it in the end!
The m/m got a little getting used to, especially all the sex scenes but all the relationships and everything were really sweet and that made up for it. I especially liked the twist with Hal and Lin in the end. I had a sneaking suspicion that the mysterious red head might turn out to be a guy...
I love the plot and the way you created a whole new but completly realistic world.
I think that maybe a little more involvment with the Union might have given a bigger twist to the plot and made the story even more exciting.
But otherwise I loved the stories and hope maybe to see a sequal to Traces Of Doubt...
Best of luck!

Loved it!! That was such a sweet ending to the story. Corrin and Vanya's reaction to Hal and his 'partner' was funny. See! I knew that was going to happen. At first I was sure his partner would be a man, then I thought it was just me being ... well.. ME, but I was sure again after the ending to Ch.34. That was great! Go Hal!
Nice to see more of Sal and Troy and what they plan to do next, especially after them being the focal point at the beginning of the story. Their sharing memories, and talk of what to do next was nicely done.
Vanya is fine now, and with Corrin. We've got all the other pairings: Lancer and Scott, Orwel and Juri, Rori and Andre... they're all happy. Osip and Arria are married. Fonzo and Shaun eventually get it on. ^_~ Happy endings are great, aren't they?
And I don't know how you manage to read my mind, or I yours, but I was going to place in a review that I would have liked to see Terry again; and there he was at the end. ^_^ You don't miss out anything!
Congrats on a great story. I hope you write more with these guys some day. I'll miss 'em!

he, he, he. I saw this coming for a long time, ever since Haldor got with his 'girlfriend', I just knew what was coming. ^_~ This confirmed it for me. Get IN there, Hal!! A nicely paced penultimate chapter.

Well, that was a lovely chapter. ^_^ It was so nice to see Scott and Lancer, the two most important characters in "MR" back in the centre of things and having a scene to themselves. I miss those two. Scott's been gone for too long. So that was great. And I'm so pleased that Osip and Arria are getting married. It's like I've seen all these characters grow and then they move off and get married... *laughs*... the Juri/Orwel stuff was funny! And the sibling interaction between him and Osip. *sighs* I love these guys. :P

I think this is my first review for your stories. I've been reading this for a long time, but it isn't in my nature to give opinions. So I'm admittably a very lazy reviewer.
However I wanted to thank you for these wonderful stories you've written. It's been a pleasure to read them. I believe I spent a day or two reading Mount Robillard and what there was of Traces of Doubt. Will there be more side stories for this series?

::guilty lurker footprints::
Bree

Excellent chapter, as always. ^_^ It's so nice that all the characters have their little complexities; they're all so very human.
I'm SO freakin pleased that they're coming back from the Zodiac System. *crosses fingers* Does this mean we get steamy reunions between Scott/Lancer and Osip/Aria? I love those four and Shaun/Fonzo best out of everyone.
Please, PLEASE update soon. I really hope there is still a lot left to go with this. I enjoy it so much.
x. Dean .X

Happy holidays! I've read Mount Robill(I can't spell it) and Traces of Doubt for a few weeks now. I'm sorry I don't review but I have no idea what to say and I read mostly when I'm at school. I really think your a great writer. My favorite character is Scott. And I just love everything! Please keep writing and I'll try to review more often.