Amazing story!! I think you made the story flow a lot better than in Retribution. I just love your stories and your writing :-) Great job!!

Amazing story. I really love it. A few of my favorite things were him calling her Princess, Grace, and the sunglasses which showed how thoughtful Flo was. There are a couple things you might want to do though. change this story to complete, and fiddle with the title. As it is it doesn't seem to represent the story. Anyways, it was fantastic!

This story is so good I like it just as much as I like La Cinq and thats a lot lol. Your a great writer, keep writing so I have great stories to read!

Beautiful story!!

I really enjoyed this story, it was really something special.

Hello! I read La Cinq and it's sequel before I chanced upon this, so I find Three Blind Mice a bit.. bland. But it's an improvement from the prequel. No offence meant or anything:) But La Cinq is wonderful:) Please update Behind the Mask soon!

Cheers!

im sry i didnt review for the 1st one. i liked it but i liked this one way better. the couples were perfect. ur writing has gotten better and so has the plot of the story. i loved it. great job!

What a sweet sweet story!

::sobs::YAY. Happy ending! I love it. Very awesome. A couple of mistakes earlier on where it seems like the story is rushed...but besides that the story is WONDERFUL. ::sobs some more::I love happy endings. Truly I do.

~Lyllien

I liked this sequel but I think for a sequel wich is after retribution, there aren't enough of Alex and Eve's life.Sad in the sense that we've grow fond of these characters ( or personnaly i was lol ).Anyway Austin and Florence are a cute item but she's so naive it's sickenning at a point. happily you made her take a bullet so she's less naive but still. lolI prefer women like Etta in La cinq, who're more of a fighter.

Please don't mind my bad english but I'm french so I try.

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uum, yah, i just sat down about 2 and a half hours ago and read this(and enjoyed my dinner)...I LOVE IT! 'course i love it, u wrote it. Your an excellent author ya know? Great job with this story! im happy i was able to read it all in one night, no waiting for new chapters or anything. Thats the good thing about finding good stories so late. :)

Sensitive and quite wonderful. Your writing has improved since "Retribution".

luv da fic
update soon

I read this about a year ago (as OniTiger) and loved it. I just wanted to say: THIS IS EVEN BETTER THE SECOND TIME!! Why don't I have an Austin? T-T I love your writing style and the undeniable power in your words. If I could, I'd read these stories all day ^^.

your plot writing got alot better in this story. there was a definate reason for the actions ^_^. i was a bit confused in the beginning. i was like, what?! austins back again?! but then i figured out that it was a different one and then i got it! great story