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| Faithiny 2005-06-26 ch 1,   | Short. Simple. Sweet. Well written. The short sentences convey the pain better than any long ones would. I really enjoy your use of commas. Way to go! |
| Lex C 2003-08-25 ch 1, | Nice format, short and lovely. Reminds me of something my friend is going through right now. I'll show it to him *adds to favorites list* |
| EBS 2003-08-25 ch 1, | I'm so sorry that I didn't get in touch with you before hand, but I didn't know if I were leaving the school till this morning. I couldn't find your email either. I forgot about this website, but I signed your guestbook on your website because I wanted you to email me so I could tell you and to also get your new email. Please email me at ebs_i_am@yahoo.com Please, bye, Elise |