Wow... Excellent work!! I love the first and last two lines.. great poem! Keep writing.

wow that was incredible. i love ur wording. it's very inpressive. i hold to what i said in my profile if u review mine i'll review urs and i am happy u did becuz i have had the pleasure of reading this. it's absolutely, impressively amazing!

I'm not a huge fan of poetry but I like this...maybe because my mind always finds itself drawn to dark things anyway!!

Or maybe just because I'm strange!

Great job anyway...keep it up

Spawny

I like. That's pretty good.


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The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King

Good! Flows and sounds perfect. Keep writing.

Simply beautiful. ^^ Keep writing!

~Lady Raseleane

I love the rhyming, the ending is a bit abrupt, but in a way it brings everything together, nicely done ^.^