Very interesting beginning! I want to know what happends, and what else she sees, and what the !*@% is the doctor's problem. (I'd almost think he WAS one of the creatures, and didn't want anybody to know...)

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I like this chapter. I often get into books myself, but not to the extent that I would think to myself that I'm attacted, or that certain creatures exist. Of course, my personal beliefs are different, but that doesn't matter. Keep up the great wrting, I'm looking forward to new chapters. Later!