i seriously had to laugh when i saw the title.. this happens wayy to much.. reality sucks but ya.. very detailed poem...i like that it tells a story tahts touching

I really like this, even though its very sad. I'm not sure why but I can relate to it someone (although I did not miss my chance with a girl or anything, because I am a girl, but thats obvious because no guy would have a name-thing like ButterfliKysses or rant on like this) Any-Who, Write more ASAP!

Ah, looks like someon emissed there chance.. hehehhe, well I like this very well written. Well Ive returned the review (ain't I such a nice guy?)

C Shot

(btw i read your bio and I am over the age of 14)

Such a sad song, but wonderfully writen. I hope you catch the next girl that falls for you.

Keep writing.

-Seras

Aw, that's really sweet. Life would be far too easy if we could see our mistakes before we made them. Well structured and well thought out song. Well done xx

are you sure you wrote this? its like you stole the words right from my thoughts!It cool!

im not sure yet what i thought of the song, but dude i feel for you. im guessing this actually means a lot to you, which i like but...agh i still cant decide whether i despise it and want to stab it or whether i think its sweet. lets go happy. ill say its sweet.

You sound like Scarlett from Gone with the Wind, man.

My sympathy...

Good job- sometimes the rhymes were slightly forced, but overall it was a good poem.

m* Sunflower, anyone?