**sniffles** That's so sweet. I luv it!

You showed your emotions flawlessly.


~Heart of the Sword

I can totally relate! Love is so cruel! I hate it but I love it at the same time. Mostly I hate it because I think it makes me weak. But at the same time it makes me stronger. It's strange.
Anyway, I really liked your peom. I enjoy your style. I hope to see much more of this, though I would read more of your stuff but it is late and I need to get up for school early, which sucks but, anyway I have a real hard English test tomarrow that I am totally stressing about because it determines whether or not I can stay in the college course English class I am taking in High School. And I really like it! Not that you prbbably care, but it is important to me and I have no clue why I had to tell you this in a reveiw. But anyway, have a lovely day.

Pedestrian

One word -- lovely.

I've liked this guy for 6 years, but I'm afraid to tell him how I feel, because he's like a brother to me, and I don't want to lose his friendship. I had a dream last night that he died, and I never got to tell him how I felt...and then I woke up crying! As soon as school starts, I'm gonna let him know. I dont want to have any regrets or what-if's in my life.

My advice...just go for it!

hey that was good i have that same feeling everyday about one of my best friends...very good keep it up

*sighs and ** her head sadly* I know how that is...

I really like this and I can relate to it very well. (Read my poem Hey, There, I think you'd like it from reading this. They're very similar.)

Very Strick poem... It speaks for it's self... I enjoyed it dearly... Keep up the good work Brad
AKA
BradTheRad

good job...i've been there [kinda still am] i like this.

hey its me the author it is about a guy i like but he is my bestfriend if you read some of my other poems uuyou might understand it better casue most of my poems are about him okay i g2g thanx for the reviews

i totally relate to this poem. truth is i dont think you will EVER be able to get over this person that you love, but in time you will learn to love other people, with him in the back of you mind the whole time. thinking of him everyday, as i think of my loss.

that was ok

ok the part about friendshiop confused me cuz it made me unsure if it was about alover or a friend... w/o that line tho its cool!