*clap*
Wicked. Just. . .*sighs* Gorgeous way of looking at getting out of the vicious cycle.
-Jessica

I like it! I should show it to all my friends who cut themselves! It's very poetic! Yay! Sunrise

This is a really cool poem...I like!

good writting

Wow, this is good. No, it's more than good. It's amazing. It's real, so real. I can identify with it in a way it's strange to fathom. It's hard to explain. But it would be interesting to know what you mean by it, so i can see how it compares with my view. Just a suggestion ;)

Thanks for the review!

I really like this one, partly also because I myself used to [and still do sometimes...] commit self-harm. The metaphors and different vocab adds a lot to the affect. Like they say, it's not only what you say, it's how you say it! =)

~PainfullyNumb

I related to this on a personal level myself. The meanings are deep if one can relate.

Hey. its me. I just wanted to say thanks for the review it meant alot. And you poems are really great. I dont think my poems are ever good enough for anything. I just write and post em. Thanks anyway. And yours rock.

interesting poem. I like the way you connected the words "paincausedbypain.." very image-envoking. keep writing.

I never really liked angst. You give it a whole new meaning.

I like this one the best of about five that I read. Very nice.

Very, very, very nice. I can identify with this one quite well. And I *adored* the second to last line of the second stanza, it was awesome. Great poem, keep writing!

That was amazing.I don't think I have ever read a poem quite like it.

Wow this piece is great and the meaning is vivid I like the repitition of the paincausedbypaincaused...really symbolic


Thanks for the detailed review

guess who's back at last...ANYWAYZ, muchly like this one, dark and extremely well written, noticed improvement in your writing over the time with which ive been really your stuff, its getting really good and this is no exception, awesome job