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| breakdown in the waiting ro... 2004-03-28 ch 1,   | *clap* Wicked. Just. . .*sighs* Gorgeous way of looking at getting out of the vicious cycle. -Jessica |
| Love and Destroy 2004-02-16 ch 1, | I like it! I should show it to all my friends who cut themselves! It's very poetic! Yay! Sunrise |
| rd-kittykat 2004-02-04 ch 1, | This is a really cool poem...I like! |
| naughty-gal 2004-01-29 ch 1, | good writting |
| Tarya 2003-12-09 ch 1, | Wow, this is good. No, it's more than good. It's amazing. It's real, so real. I can identify with it in a way it's strange to fathom. It's hard to explain. But it would be interesting to know what you mean by it, so i can see how it compares with my view. Just a suggestion ;) |
| PainfullyNumb 2003-11-04 ch 1, | Thanks for the review! I really like this one, partly also because I myself used to [and still do sometimes...] commit self-harm. The metaphors and different vocab adds a lot to the affect. Like they say, it's not only what you say, it's how you say it! =) ~PainfullyNumb |
| Razor Sharp Kisses 2003-10-27 ch 1, | I related to this on a personal level myself. The meanings are deep if one can relate. |
| insanewhisper 2003-10-27 ch 1, | Hey. its me. I just wanted to say thanks for the review it meant alot. And you poems are really great. I dont think my poems are ever good enough for anything. I just write and post em. Thanks anyway. And yours rock. |
| katyruth 2003-10-22 ch 1, | interesting poem. I like the way you connected the words "paincausedbypain.." very image-envoking. keep writing. |
| the cereal killer 2003-10-07 ch 1, | I never really liked angst. You give it a whole new meaning. |
| Romantic Squirrel 2003-09-23 ch 1, | I like this one the best of about five that I read. Very nice. |
| Shadow 3013 2003-09-21 ch 1, | Very, very, very nice. I can identify with this one quite well. And I *adored* the second to last line of the second stanza, it was awesome. Great poem, keep writing! |
| I am Gone 2003-09-16 ch 1, | That was amazing.I don't think I have ever read a poem quite like it. |
| Clockwork Angel 2003-09-14 ch 1, | Wow this piece is great and the meaning is vivid I like the repitition of the paincausedbypaincaused...really symbolic Thanks for the detailed review |
| not sure yet 2003-09-12 ch 1, | guess who's back at last...ANYWAYZ, muchly like this one, dark and extremely well written, noticed improvement in your writing over the time with which ive been really your stuff, its getting really good and this is no exception, awesome job |