Beautiful poem. I love the imagery and the flow of the words. You have a real ability to evoke emotions.

I like that this rymes. It's cool a lot of poeple aren't talented enough to actually make a poem that rymes. :)

I love the ending. I think you need to change some of the longer lines in the poem, make them have less syllables. Maybe you meant for them to be long and all, I just don't think it fits very well. Oh, and I will review your werewolf story sometime. It's just that I've goten behind and there are other stories I'm tracking. Add that to a gazillion hours of hw and I'm dead by the time I get to your name on my fav authors list (you're at the bottom for some reason). Write more soon!

wow...
i love how you did this poem. this is a very interesting poem (and it rhymes to! mwahahaha...) they way you look at pretending problems aren't there and just putting them to the side in this poem is really cool :) boxes and bell...
*Anesta*