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| ukranianmira 2008-07-16 ch 21,   | i love it |
| outsidersgirl 2008-06-24 ch 21, | a good story |
| siddika 2007-02-20 ch 21, | amazing story. |
| ice maiden 2006-06-17 ch 21, | hi! i highly congratulate you for the well-written story! i like the whole pack. it touched my heart. gosh, i nearly burst into tears but i tried not to. haha...was supressing my emotion. anyways, a thumbs-up for you dear! you'll be an award-winning writer. |
| Alenor 2006-05-04 ch 21, | oh this was a great story. cya later ~ Alenor. |
| christien daae 2006-03-05 ch 21, | OMG I LOVED your story! two thumbs way up! |
| earlymorningdawn 2006-01-05 ch 21, | I like the idea of the plot but not the way you executed it. You went through everything WAY to fast. I didn't feel like i knew the characters. There was no depth to the story. I don't mean to be harsh i sometimes have the same problems with my stories. But i just wanted to leave you with something to think about for your other stories. Sarah |
| cnicbc 2005-10-12 ch 21, | Really cool. Totally didn't expect that ending. I like your style. |
| tickle-me-pretty15 2005-04-03 ch 21, | That was so good. I read the whole thing all the way through. ~tickles~ |
| Time Ticks Backwards 2004-06-14 ch 20, | Auw! That was so sweet! Evil One |
| Spooky152 2004-06-04 ch 21, | I'm afraid I have to agree with Midnight Shadows and Polaris. When you run through major events like these so quickley, it's hard to form an attachment to the characters. Therefore, you might be loosing a lot of readers because of this particular way of writing. It's a cute premise, and many people seem to like it, so there's probably not much you can do now. I'd just like to see you apply more detail in your future stories. You have talent, but make sure to bring it out every once in awhile. Hope this helped, Katie |
| JessiGurl18 2004-02-23 ch 21, | This story left me teary-eyed. I love it! -Jess |
| Mahagony 2003-10-27 ch 21, | YAY!! |
| Ilmator 2003-10-16 ch 21, | finally! they end up together! i took them forever. great story. |
| Lily and Tianra 2003-10-16 ch 21, | wow... im speechless just wow... i LOVED it TTFN Luv Yas Lils |