yeah,i liked this one,too...but maybe it also could use a little work before it hits the big time,huh?
that's the ticket!
your irish lover

Wow... i know you said you didn't write it about anyone... but i really like it. i can most definietly relate. Awesome awesome awesome man. I love your work

I liked this one too. What can I say? I'm a fan

Got your name from DreamNightmare's bio (sam) and decided to check it out cuz it's not that often that I see males on ficpress. I don't really know why but so far I only know a minimum of like 5. Anyway, good song. I liked it quite a bit. It's got some angst in it and then quite descriptive. It's interesting and actually refers to what happens when people don't want to take the blame, so they pass it on. This was a really good song. When I have more time, not so late in the night, I'll read some more of your stuff and review, but for now...ciao!

Love always,
A-Light-From-Your-Darkness

gd at the beginning but er confusing at the end , u seem to lose ur rhyming words and change the structure of the song, but still a great peice of work!

Dude, that song hurts!

- Crucified Sanctity -

hmm...i like it. it seems kinda simple though. i know you want me to trash it but i really can't find a way. (which is a comment unto itself.) it seems like your general love song. next time try to make your songs more complex but not as bad as mine because my songs are the epitomy of abstract. I don't even understand them. oh, and keep writing foo'!

Good, I like the repitition. Very descriptive.

i like this one...its really good :) ive lost my ability 2 rite songs :-P
Skye