really interesting story, i just found and i was so sad to find that it hasn't been updated in years. please start updating again! i really want to see how the rest of this goes.

can you please update this fic.'its not the easiest fic to read as your subject matter is confrontational and heartwrenching. i really look forward to cecilia finding out about fred's depression. how come no-one has stood up to freds father about this abuse, fred's secretary just brushed it off.i hope you can write into the story about fred being able to break free from the prison his father has constructed around him, and have fred being able to have more time with his son (Bailey is a cool name by the way, he really seems like a cool character).

i like your characters, i like the situations you put them in (fred admitting his alcoholism to that stupid co-worker of him, his collapse at the function) and sincerly hope you can update so we can know how fred starts to deal with his depression and prozac addiction

i just started to read this, and hey, it isn't bad at all. i really feel for your characters. they have their weaknesses but i like the strength of character that fred shows in not wanting to be like his father. i look forward to seeing how this story pans out (light dig for an update here)

update update etc...

YAY! You updated. Great chapter. It made you laugh, made you cry, made you feel really sad, and even really happy in some parts. I love when chapters do that. Great job!

I love how you portray Fred. It's refreshing to see a male character depicted like that. Usually they're all macho but this guy has some real vulnerabilities. Keep up the great work!

YAY, you updated again. I love this story. Great job and great chapter!

I love this story. It is really well written and very funny but sad! Please continue!

I love this story. Some parts are sad and some parts are funy. I love stories like that. Great job. I hope that you update soon. Can't wait to read more!

Damn you and your kick-** writing. I loved this. I have no clue why but I imagined Fred's daddy to look like Donald Sutherland. I don't know why, but it did. He's Canadian, you know. Sorry, Canadian actors are KICK **! Michael Cuccione was Canadian. AND Corey Haim. I don't know why I saw Fred's dad as Donald because Donald looks NOTHING like Fred, but his dad and Donald look kinda scary. Whee! I'm off to go write, myself, now, and I'll read some more later on! Yahoo!

-Chelsea-

*laughs*

Sex scenes make me laugh. I'm such a kid. Hey, I'm 15, sue me! Anyway, these two chapters were doggone kick ** just like the first two, and I can't wait what else you have in store for Fred! Bailey is such an adorable name for a boy (reminds me of Scott Wolf) but it also reminds me of my friend from elementary school who thrived on making our friendship dramatic. I remember this one time we were talking on MSN and she all of a sudden called me a ** and a bad friend. I called her up right away and I demanded to know why she said those things. She just says calmly, "Someone told me you called me a **." And I was all, "THAT'S why you flipped out at me?" And she simply says "Yes". I was so angry. Our friendship ended in grade 7 when I moved away. Good riddance eh?

Don't you LOVE how my reviews make no sense?! YIPPEE!! I love how yer stories always make me reflect on something in MY life, jsut the way the name 'Bailey' does. WHEE!

And for the 'fanfiction heros' section of my low-blow website, it's not up yet. ACtually, I haven't even put the website address up yet, but thats because the site itself isn't finished. But yeah, geocities.com is being faggish so I can't log in unless I wait for four days. So yeah, thats the update on my sad, sad life

I'm wearinv crest white strips! FEAR ME! only 20 more minutes to go. *sigh*
I'm off to read chapter 5! Yippee! I may not review chapter 5 but I will read it. LATER!

-chelsea-

hahahaha i havent got a CLUE why my penname is flying-nun (that was from a million years ago when I thought I was cool and quoting the lost boys every five seconds. i still do quote the lost boys every five seconds, but now i know im not cool anymore) ANYWAY! this is Chelsea, aka webuiltthiscityonrockandroll. And this ROCKS! Not only is it about Fred, my hero, but it's one of the best written stories I've read in a long time. I cant make this review too long because my brother needs to go to work in a couple of minutes and I'm going along for the car ride so I can get a mcflurry. m...fake ice cream...m...artificial ingredients...ANYWAY! This rocks, Fred rocks, and I shall keep reading after I get back!

YOU STILL ROCK!

-chelsea-

Yeah! You tell them Fred.

Love it, keep it up...working on my OC's so I'm not writing a huge ** review...

-Kristine

What? So you don't tell me when you update this story now? What the hell!? *hits wall with fist, then goes back to normal*

hehehe

Good chapter. God I hate that Maccallister **. And Fred's dad. But not Fred. He rocks my box!

Now I must shower so I can go out to a religious event that isn't even part of my religion and pretend to have some kind of life...

Dude, I have to tell you about my real life Jeff. He's...we'll I'll tell you some other time, as I'm not sure this is the place for it.

I'll update our story soon, I promise, and the other one, with the kangaroo.

Update soon, and TELL me, so I can read it sooner, or I'll be on your ** like ** on velcrow!

Wow, I'm demanding today. Hehehe...I'm going, I'm going, I promise.

Great chapter, talk to you soon!
*waves and jumps up and down like a lunatic*

Kristine

*falls over, but sits up, still waving*

This story has got me hooked. I'm usually not into the angsty stuff but there's just something about this one. Keep up the good work and I do hope Fred and Cecilia come out on top in the end!

This story has got me hooked. I'm usually not into the angsty stuff but there's just something about this one. Keep up the good work and I do hope Fred and Cecilia come out on top in the end!