Reviews for The Lady of the Marches

Azrael 2005-06-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love it. Very amusing and has cliche things in a non cliche way... did that makes sense? Anyway, Lord Anthony was great. i love the normal names you give people. No Natalie Ravenwing La'Roche or other like that. Angela kind of reminds me of Arthur dent from HH2G. Jacqueline was cool, one of the few some what powerful women that comes out right and doesn't me off somehow. I do hope you continue this but it seems you have a lot of other stories your working on but hey, it would be nice. Oh I read your rants in fantasy and stuff, very well done and I enjoyed them greatly.
374678 2005-02-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseSeriously, I thought of this story very flat. It seemed to just drone on and on without anything interesting happening. And the ending is worse than the body.e
374678 2005-02-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseSeriously, I thought of this story very flat. It seemed to just drone on and on without anything interesting happening. And the ending is worse than the body.e
XxintoXpiecesxX 2003-09-25 ch 1,	abuseThe story doesn't have much of an ending. I mean stopping there works but theres not much closure. I'd still concider it a good story though.