dark, depressing, morbid... many adjectives could describe this fic... but then i can affirm that its also good. idont quite understand where youre heading with the story but ill stick around to find out... write more.

hey ed its kate havent taleked to you in a long time and i've been watching this story for another update and i havent seen any. hope to hear from you. call me eddie o.
Love kate

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hey guy...tis was...axually good... i only read chapter one but...yeah. i think ill finish reading it now...later

hey eddie, why havent you written anymore you know i love your stories and i would read them any day so what's going on are you too busy? thats okay i understand being your bestest friend and all. anyways i want to read more the next time i come to this site. if not i am gonna sick jeff on you!!
Love you eddie-ble
Kathrin

I'm a lazy writer here who doesn't want to log in.
It was good, VERY VERY VERY good. I'd clap, but I've gotta go wash my hands before I touch anything else beside the computer.
Kepp it up.
JM

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*goes all spastic*
holy christ on a muffin, you updated! i was almost sure you'd abandonned the story, and i was quite put out...
but yay! UPDATEYNESS! s'a good chapter. i wanna see what's up with all the weirdness.
you havent been online in eighteen-hundred million thousand billion years. onlineness is good, i tell you! *waves magical hyponotizing fingers in your face* online!
lurve, zoe

amazing. I will be a reader from now on so please update!!

I've just read both your stories. Logically they should have disturbed me, but they didn't. Which, I guess, is rather sad. Ahh the depleted morals of our (an assumption yes...) generation. Currently I can only say that two things are Wrong. Animal cruelty, (Which really ** me off, and DON'T kill off Neko please.) and rape. But rape is only because I have a, what, 3 in 4 chance of it happening to me? Definitly not something to look forward to. Please update the Neko story (and yes it has a new title).
-Briel

woot. you updated and stuff! whee!

i likey. but it's too damn short. *shakes fist at you* dont make me send the pizza man after you. trust me, he's frightening. he'll demand coupons.

violence is good. mm hmm. pretty words... *dies of brain failure*

my brain is not working right now. but you know i lurf you and your story anyway. *smooch*

No deaths! Yay! I liked the scene btw Porter and Josh, they are good together. Louis, I am confused about but I am sure you'll clear it up. Might be my favorite chapter. Keep writing.

Hey again!
Ok, I have to be honest... I'm completely lost with this chapter! =P
What in the world is going on with Josh? Is Louis actually alive? Is he a vamp? Or was Josh halluncinating because he lost so much blood?
I think he was halluncinating, because the funeral is over, isn't it?
Argh, I'm a bit confused, but hopefully the next chapter will clear it up a bit. Still written brilliantly, but what's going on! I can't wait to find out!
Love alwayz
jess
xo

Another review after reading through your reviews and profile...
a) lol, your friend... Jason? is very cute =P let me guess, boyfriend? Just a guess... hehe. He's right though... its one of the best I've read on fictionpress.
b)ah. I've got a friend called Edwin!
c) I'm bored, can you tell? So off to read your other story... And review all the chapters this time... hope it lives up to this one! ;)
love
jess
xo

It's absolutely gorgeous, for lack of anything more descriptive.
I really love the characters, they're very alive, and very real.
Like Louis, for instance. He was an utter bastard to Josh, and then he expected him to be faithful.
You won't get that sort of character depth in most stories - none of them seem to be instrinsically *right* here, they all have their faults. I like that.
Also love the themes. The darkness gives it an extra dimension, and sometimes black is just as gorgeous as light, is it not? I don't know how to explain it, but sometimes there are things in the dark that can be more beautiful then the light. You've showed this really well.
You're writing style is brilliant, something you don't see very often here unfortunately. Good wording, good grammar, and lots of very explicit and descriptive adjectives. It really helps the story.
I like Kenneth, and Carrie's written really well.
Do I get the sense that you're an avid Anne Rice 'Vampire Chronicles' fan?
Anyway, its unusual, its new, its realistic, and I love it.
Slightly confused about Louie though... is he a vampire now?!? I'm just guessing at why he squeezed Josh's hand back ;) and didn't Josh feel the squeeze?
Keep up the good work, looking foward to reading more of this. Please email or leave a review... whatever when you put the next chapter up.
Can't wait!
Love alwayz
jess aka anjel
xo
PS by the way, i like your choice of songs ;)

Great, great story! I absolutely love it! Please update soon!